Rare Egypt Stone
A.k ltd. was an international company. It arranged the science exhibition in Delhi. Rahul was a 16 year old. He was a dreamer boy. He went to the exhibition. In the exhibition, the main point of attraction was the rare stone of Egypt. It costs $50,00,000. There were too many crowds. People come from different countries to see this stone. That's why the cost of the ticket was also high. It costs $500 per person. We all were seeing the stone. Suddenly, the light was gone. There was darkness. After 30 sec electricity had come. Then we see the stone was not there. Everyone said that the thief had come and he robbed the precious stone. But the manager said that it was not possible because we checked the recording of the camera. And there was no one.
Then one lady said he was an invisible men. Thereafter manager said it can be possible. Because the stone had some magical power. Ancient people say that the stone can complete all the wishes of the owner. Then the manager called the police and registered the report.
Police did not believe the existence of an invisible man. Police start their investigation. Three hours spent and the police were not able to catch the thief. Then the manager appointed a detective. He was too clever. He decided that he just behaved like he was searching the stone but in reality he wouldn't do anything. Suddenly the police came and informed us that they found the stone and the detective also says" I also found the stone". Thereafter one monk had come and he also said "I found your stone". Now the manager got confused. Then the owner spoke" I will tell you which one is real".
The owner saw every stone carefully. After that he said the stone which was found by the police was real. Other stones were fake. Then the detective told he purchased the stone from the market. Because he wants to become popular. Then the monk said I purchased this stone because I want to receive a huge amount as a gift from you. Then at the end Rahul gets up with a smile. The whole robbery was just a fantasy of Rahul. There was nothing real. Everything was normal in the exhibition.
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